Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Some corrected errors


 

  1. Some fruits are  is unhealthy.
  2. Planes allow to people to move to another countries.
  3. The Technology is progressing a lot.
  4. A good example of progress is the speed of some trains.
  5. If you travel in the at night, you can travel in a safer more safety way/ more safely.
  6. I don’t like eating meat of at all.
  7. As a child I hated strawberries.
  8. When you are an adult you are able to understand the mistakes know the fault you made in the past.
  9. Knowing how to speak with everybody is important.
  10. We must know what happened in the did past.
  11. I would tell/recommend/suggest/advise say them to go to Shiraz and Esfahan.
  12.  It’s central of our political and economical companies centre.
  13. These are pros and cons of/to about this.
  14. To raise up your child.
  15. When you are young people you prefer to be happy have happiness.
  16. You can mention Air pollution is one example that can be mentioned.

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